A Fun Moment

Writing Purpose: To Entertain

Type of writing: moment in time

WALT use our senses to describe

• (see, hear, smell, feel, taste)
• different sentence starters / some short sentences
• action verbs (crash / crashing, scratches / scratch / scratching, smack / smacks / smacking bounce / bouncing, sprint / sprints / sprinting, dodge / dodges / dodging)
• present tense (I am, he is, we are)

I invited 11 people to my 11th birthday. I am amazed what food I have on the table waiting for me. It was all the food that I wanted to have. I wanted to eat all the food on the table by myself. Then the cake came out. It was on the bench by the sink. It was a jaffa cake with delicious icing on it. It also had little bits of chocolate lines that were all over the cake.  Then I added more detail to it by putting on some snakes. The snakes were all different colors like red, yellow, purple. I put the snakes around the outside of the candles and to make it even I had to weave it between to candles to touch the other one. They were all touching each other around the cake.  I look at it ,looks alot better then it was before. Then I double check to see if it has got all eleven candles on it and it does indeed have eleven candles on it.

Then everyone started to sing happy birthday to me. After that I huff and then I puff and I blowed the candles out except for one. Then I blowed out the last candle and it finally went out. Then I cut the first  my way down the ages slice of jaffa cake. Then I started to give out the cake. I start with the oldest people first and work my way down the ages. The oldest I know is Noel. Then I gave everyone there slice of cake. Then I got my piece of cake it was delicious. I would want to have that cake again and again. I got the biggest slice of jaffa cake out of everyone else. Everyone enjoyed the yummy party food and had a good time at my birthday party and all the rest of it. It was a great time.